Category: Communication

My Own Sonnet

December 14, 2014 / / 4 Comments

Family.

Every member has this blood in their vein,

All those people came out a narrow lane.

We are all on the same magnetic land,

Our connections like a beach, grains of sand.

Our relationship this month relates to giving,

The stuff they got will be the stuff they like.

The whole point of Christmas is, be living,

Everyone’s crazy when hunger will strike.

Our family have the power to save,

Especially when our mothers were brave.

Our blood and veins are said to be the same,

Our fathers have done their best to be there,

Even in the process, it’s hard to bare.

Sonnet summaries

December 8, 2014 / / 1 Comment

Sonnet 1,

In this sonnet, Shakespeare has used natural imagery, example, “That thereby beauty’s rose might never die”, this shows that Shakespeare is talking about the person (either man or woman) who can never die. In his sonnet, his rhyming pattern goes in a ‘ABAB’ method.

Sonnet 2,

In this sonnet, the phrase ‘Where all the treasure of thy lusty days’, might be telling us that the treasure is the person who Shakespeare is talking about and ‘lusty days’ might mean they are sleeping everyday.

Sonnet 3,

In sonnet 3, Shakespeare now talks about an old woman who could possibly be his mum. The phrase ‘Look in thy glass and tell the face thou viewest’ tells me that the woman is looking at people through a glass, so that would mean that she has a glass eye and is looking at their faces as it also says ‘and tell the face thou viewest’.

Sonnet 18,

In sonnet 18, Shakespeare uses natural imagery to present love by talking about weather, for example, ‘darling buds of May’ ‘sweet birds sang’ and ‘twilight of such day’. These quotations suggest that he loves the person more than nature itself. Shakespeare also uses hyperbole in sonnet 18 by exaggerating the word ‘more’ to explain more about the summer’s day.

Sonnet 73,

In sonnet 73, Shakespeare mentions a series of weather which could be describing the special person he is talking about, example, ‘sunset fadeth in the west’, ‘black night doth’ and ‘glowing of such fire’. What these three sentences have in common is that they all mention something about the time of day.

Sonnet summaries,

by Nemare Taylor-Duffus

This is Your Online Domain

May 26, 2014 / / 0 Comments

Hello and welcome to your personal online journal.

Edutronic has been created to enhance and enrich your learning at the London Nautical School. Its purpose is to provide you with an audience for your work (or work-in-progress) and you have the choice (by altering the ‘visibility’ of your posts) of whether your work on here is visible to the world, or only to your teacher.

Anything you post here in the public domain represents you and thus it’s important that you take care with that decision, but don’t be afraid to publish your work – as the feedback you may get from people at home, your peers and people from around the internet is only likely to enhance it.

Remember you can always access your class blog and all manner of resources through the Edutronic main website – and by all means check out the sites of your peers to see what they’re getting up to as well.

If you have any questions for your teacher, an excellent way to get an answer is to create a new private post on this journal. Your teachers are am notified of any new posts and will reply swiftly to any queries.

Make the most of, and enjoy this new freedom in your English learning!

May 25, 2014

“There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed.” ― Ernest Hemingway